- have them drop into the scene following the pose from David's scene
- have them freeze and look into the camera, so no shaking of fist from Mongol
- drop out of scene quicker
I think the scene is much better and I have worked so hard on it, but apparently it is still not enough and they are going to use James' scene instead. I am actually heartbroken about the whole thing as it means I have barely any animation in the film and so will have nothing to show at the Degree show.
This is Jame's version: