I have changed this scene quite a lot since my feedback, as the Marmot run cycle has been improved and he just jumps slightly now to grab the chicken rather than being over dramatic and turning away first like he did before.
The Mongolian also barely moves although I did keep him raising his arms as I needed a way for him to have less of a grip on the chicken in order for the Marmot to be able to 'snatch' it.
I also think it looks better with this camera angle. I tried to make it more dynamic and interesting, and also lined up the Mongolian with the hut in order to draw the audience's eye down towards the action.
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