Feedback and Changes to Shots

After discussing my shots with my tutor and producer, then ringing our director, I have the following changes to make:

Scene six:

• make Mongol look away from the Marmot when he steals the chicken
• Marmot runs off faster
• Mongol arms are not twinned and land at different times

Scene seven:

• Eyebrow movement not as extreme or distracting

Scene Sixteen:

• Arms and legs have faster movement
• Hold Marmot squash for longer - another frame
• Mongol reacts - shakes fist - to Marmot taking the chicken
• Faster fall at the end with quicker camera move

Scene Twenty- One

• Mongol doesn't barge Marmot out of the way, instead comes behind him and takes the chicken
• General work all over especially on the arms

I have got the weekend to finish these shots which is an extension of three days to address the changes. I am going to Manchester on Sunday so it is unlikely I will work much then - although I am taking my laptop with me.